Tuesday, September 28, 2021

Under the Same Moon

A sad gloomy girl looking passionately to the Moon in a magical delusion to talk to it.

 


She was in her lawn

Colored in the night,

Asking the half Moon,

"Can you see him?"

 

He was alone

In the twilight

Just before the dawn,

1000 miles away off her lawn...

 

He asked the half Moon

Before it's long gone

Into the western sky

With its starry throne,

"Can you see her greeting

You in a soul so strewn?"

 

The Moon Smiles in its

Beaming glow

Watching two souls together

Loving an unloved love;

Far yet close to one another

In the flow of melted time

In a flat fretted world forever.


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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 20, 2021 at 4:00 AM

    This is so beautiful. Truly Enchanting. Thank you for sharing this.

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    1. Atique R.October 20, 2021 at 5:18 AM

      Thanks for the beautiful words. Highly appreciated.

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  2. UnknownOctober 22, 2021 at 2:35 AM

    Lovely poem with a really sad imagery. Thank you for sharing.

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  3. UnknownOctober 28, 2021 at 11:43 PM

    A beautiful poem in a unique skill. Great idea.

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